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It's been a long time since I could write like this. Hopefully I haven't lost some of that touch.
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Hi, it's been a long time since I've been on DA! I'm trying to get back into it, so I'm glad you are still here posting! You definitely have not lost your touch! I love this:
"Now, you go, and I walk the other way,
Trying to persuade my destiny to be kind,
Wasted time, fly through memories, re-living,
Horrors of shame come night by night."
It hit the heart, and that is where this needed to hit. It's so simple, but so much truth is in these words that you just have to feel it, no matter who you are. This is an emotion that we have all felt, I believe - and I like that you were able to grasp that into reality. Awesome work!
"Now, you go, and I walk the other way,
Trying to persuade my destiny to be kind,
Wasted time, fly through memories, re-living,
Horrors of shame come night by night."
It hit the heart, and that is where this needed to hit. It's so simple, but so much truth is in these words that you just have to feel it, no matter who you are. This is an emotion that we have all felt, I believe - and I like that you were able to grasp that into reality. Awesome work!